a small bit of literature.

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Offline Wanderer

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a small bit of literature.
« on: April 25, 2009, 00:31:54 »
I haven't been on for a while guys, sorry for that. I've been trying to learn C, so I could then step into Objective C and then the world of iPod app developers. Work on Night will be stalled, I may resume later, but I don't know if I'lll feel the drive to complete once my start my app project. Anywhoo, let's step into the water already, shall we?

War : http://mattthesage.deviantart.com/art/War-120356405

Age of Gears Prologue : http://mattthesage.deviantart.com/art/Age-of-Gears-Prologue-120353413

Critique would be nice, but I don't think I will change my War piece, unless it has to do with grammatical errors.
"I wander to many places, but I quest to few."

YOUTUBE: http://www.youtube.com/user/CreepyThumb

I leave and come back, kinda like a ghost. Hmm...

Re: a small bit of literature.
« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2012, 07:45:04 »
I like it! You're really eloquent, too bad the link for your "Age of Gears Prologue" is broken :(

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Re: a small bit of literature.
« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2012, 12:43:51 »
In War you better call the fallen angel Lucifer, not Satan. That would sound more powerful. (check out the attachment)
Son of prometheus