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Being Creative => Development Showcase => Topic started by: Wanderer on April 25, 2009, 00:31:54

Title: a small bit of literature.
Post by: Wanderer on April 25, 2009, 00:31:54

I haven't been on for a while guys, sorry for that. I've been trying to learn C, so I could then step into Objective C and then the world of iPod app developers. Work on Night will be stalled, I may resume later, but I don't know if I'lll feel the drive to complete once my start my app project. Anywhoo, let's step into the water already, shall we?

War : http://mattthesage.deviantart.com/art/War-120356405

Age of Gears Prologue : http://mattthesage.deviantart.com/art/Age-of-Gears-Prologue-120353413

Critique would be nice, but I don't think I will change my War piece, unless it has to do with grammatical errors.

Title: Re: a small bit of literature.
Post by: Mathexpert on March 06, 2012, 07:45:04

I like it! You're really eloquent, too bad the link for your "Age of Gears Prologue" is broken :(

Title: Re: a small bit of literature.
Post by: Denis on March 06, 2012, 12:43:51

In War you better call the fallen angel Lucifer, not Satan. That would sound more powerful. (check out the attachment)