While I typically try to avoid criticism, I feel it's necessary in this case...Let's say I wanted to make a s'more and I gave it the nice, rigid graham crackers for structure, the marshmallow for a good texture and flavor, and the chocolate for that extra touch...This level isn't the best s'more ever, gotta say. Its plot is inherently whimsical, so I didn't expect much, but it'd be nice to have one beyond a simple "Go get pizza for ....this guy...." There goes the structured graham cracker. It's soggy. But that's okay, we can eat it with a napkin maybe.Now for the marshmallow...this whole thing felt empty. No flavor, no textured feel.But, maybe the chocolate? Some nice touches as a consolation? I'll give you that that's not horrid shift work, but I've seen better.All in all, I wouldn't eat your s'more. But at least you've got the basics. Now go and put some effort into one, and I think you could whip up a nice one....Maybe a little more thought and effort, is all. But I've seen much worse. I'll give you that. :3
You make me hungry.