[Small] [Easy/Normal] [Scenic/Experimental] Get focus

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Offline Wibi

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[Small] [Easy/Normal] [Scenic/Experimental] Get focus
« on: October 10, 2017, 02:14:13 »


A small level, hopefully with more depth than my last one. Contains fourteen rooms, one toast fact and two endings. Works with normal KS.

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All tilesets, gradients, and music - Fire Nuclear Crocodile Killer\Impossible.ogg - are property of Nifflas. Feedback is much wanted!
« Last Edit: June 14, 2018, 23:18:42 by canteven »

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Re: [Small] [Easy/Normal] [Scenic/Experimental] Get focus
« Reply #1 on: October 10, 2017, 09:44:26 »
Good level! A couple things, though. There are void screens on either side of x1000y997. And...

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Re: [Small] [Easy/Normal] [Scenic/Experimental] Get focus
« Reply #2 on: October 10, 2017, 13:15:42 »
Thought provoking! In addition to Purple Ink's suggestions, there's a file called screenie1.png in the level folder that you could delete.

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Re: [Small] [Easy/Normal] [Scenic/Experimental] Get focus
« Reply #3 on: October 10, 2017, 14:03:06 »
I agree with Sergio. Quite intriguing, and even a bit unsettling at times, especially...
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Nice use of the default tilesets! I also liked the choice of background music and...
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Some KS levels by me:

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Re: [Small] [Easy/Normal] [Scenic/Experimental] Get focus
« Reply #4 on: October 10, 2017, 16:03:14 »
Thanks for the feedback!
Spoiler: Some minor criticism (click to show/hide)
In y998-997 I thought the gradient and the objects in the room would be enough, it was kind of "bare" on purpose since you're climbing to an exposed night sky.
My strategy for x1004y999 was "stay in the entry and jump over the bullets," but it turns out the bullets can still hit you there on some attempts. It's now been reworked as of the latest update, thanks!

Voidscreens, the stay cutscene and screenie1.png have all been fixed. (day 1 patch woot!)

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Re: [Small] [Easy/Normal] [Scenic/Experimental] Get focus
« Reply #5 on: October 10, 2017, 16:16:55 »
Here's my technique for the original version of x1004y999. Looking forward to trying to updated version, though!