[Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem

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Offline pfrangip

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[Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« on: December 19, 2015, 16:23:22 »
Hello all!

So I'm also a member of a creative writing site called SCP Foundation. It started as creepy works only, but eventually evolved into general paranormal/weird/interesting/sci-fi/creative works.  8)

Well, around Christmas Time they do a "Secret Santa" where someone does something creative for another randomly-chosen SCP member. Most people do Fanfiction or Artwork, I decided to do a Knytt Stories level! (Hopefully he's not also a member of this site  :^^: )

I had to make it easy so that anyone unfamiliar with KS would still be able to enjoy it. Having said that, I had my wife playtest it, and she knows very little about SCP or Knytt, and she liked it, so I believe anyone should be able to enjoy it.  :)

EDIT: This level has SCP-2660,SCP-2548, and cameos by SCP-1981 and SCP-1193.

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You can get the level here. (I used my SCP username, ABETTIK, as my author name for this one.)
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Re: [Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« Reply #1 on: December 19, 2015, 20:40:43 »
Really nice level, short and sweet  :)

I got really into SCP a while back, read a ton of articles. Some really clever stuff on that site! My favorite has to be this one though: http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-426 

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Emma fell down a well - Enviromental KS level inspired by Salmoneous/Elder
Level in the works: Whitebow Island

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Re: [Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« Reply #2 on: December 19, 2015, 22:29:07 »
Hey Bulbs! Glad to see you liked it! Thanks much for doing an LP. It was fun to see my own level being played... felt a little like being famous.  :^^:
EDIT: I also really like the Little voices you give each character. Well done!

I realized I forgot to put anywhere what the SPCs were that I referenced... so I amended the OP with that list.  :S

As for the toaster, yes I am indeed a great SCP, I am one of my favorites also.  XD
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Re: [Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« Reply #3 on: December 23, 2015, 02:43:45 »
This was a pretty fun level. I enjoyed it!

One question:
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Re: [Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« Reply #4 on: December 23, 2015, 03:00:26 »
This was a pretty fun level. I enjoyed it!

One question:
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Good question!
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Re: [Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« Reply #5 on: December 23, 2015, 17:57:39 »
That was a short but neat level. I read quite a lot of SCP articles a few years ago, I really like the idea of using these concepts in actual games :) It's a shame a lot of SCP based fangames are usually one of those generic "endless corridor simulators" when there are so many interesting and creative ideas in the archive.

Spoiler: About the challenges (click to show/hide)
Some KS levels by me:

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Re: [Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« Reply #6 on: December 23, 2015, 18:18:15 »
That was a short but neat level. I read quite a lot of SCP articles a few years ago, I really like the idea of using these concepts in actual games :) It's a shame a lot of SCP based fangames are usually one of those generic "endless corridor simulators" when there are so many interesting and creative ideas in the archive.

Spoiler: About the challenges (click to show/hide)

Ah yes! I knew I had seen it in a level before! But I didn't know which! Yes, the credit goes to you for coming up with the original Bravery challenge.

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Re: [Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« Reply #7 on: December 24, 2015, 03:02:17 »
This was a pretty fun level. I enjoyed it!

One question:
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Good question!
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Ah, okay!
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Re: [Misc][Small] Small Containment Problem
« Reply #8 on: December 29, 2015, 20:30:00 »
I need to get that lamp out of my head...

Uhh, good level. I'd advise making it a bit less segmented and more congruent next time. Otherwise, good work. I didn't spot any voids or wallswims.

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