[Challenge/Puzzle][Normal] A Few Problems (UPDATED 05 July)

Here it is:

A FEW PROBLEMS
 Nothing to worry about.


Juni is called from her cabin in the ship by the Captain.

Just a few teensy problems.

Should be fine.


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Beta Testing:
NintendoMaster
Juni     Juni from IRC, that is

Enjoy!

Updated!
(Yes, this is something of a major bump. Sorry )
The new version has bugs fixed, a new CO, a few typos fixed... just generally slightly more polished. Link changed to new version. Check it out!

I enjoyed it. Graphics a little basic, and sometimes the level was very quickly made, but a nice story in overall. Also, there's a void, but you're already aware of it by now.

Yeah, thanks for the void report
It takes a while to upload on my connection, so I'll wait a while in case any other problems come up before I reupload.
Graphics, on the ship part at least, are intentionally somewhat basic. It's to give a clean and simple feel.

What where your beta testers doing...

Nice funny level. 
The music perfectly fits to Juni, for some reason.
These graphics are simple but work well.
There's a swimmy in the last screen.
I must stop writing in fragmented sentences.

Nice funny level. 
The music perfectly fits to Juni, for some reason.

I made the music myself, glad you like it

There's a swimmy in the last screen.

Ahhhhh... thanks. I'll give it ~12 hours, then I'll upload a fixed version.

...beat it, great but bizarre level.

can't really beat it... it is a beta and unfinished...

good!

can't really beat it... it is a beta and unfinished...

Um... what? Is there some level-breaking bug that I haven't found?
There's a few bugs, I admit, but nothing that would make it unfinishable.
The level is not a beta and is intended as finished. Please provide more detail.

I think what drwright meant was that it

Umm I'd appreciate if you'd spoiler that, it's true I guess but it's still telling the ending, so. And:

This level was... pretty bad.
It's butt-ugly to the point that I couldn't distinguish what was going on, it has multiple glitches and holes, and the design is just bad. It's also rather short.
If this is your first level, or one of your first, then it could be considered acceptable.
I can at least give you kudos for creating the tileset, which could be used well if it wasn't so bland (the ladder was good). And the story was good, except the "just a few problems, should be fine" got old after hearing it the first time.
Sorry to be an ass.

This level was kind of fun, but the outside area was fairly ugly, with those spikes floating in the air an all.
And the music in the starting area was not pleasant to listen to. Also, the explosion sound is really loud and startles me every time I play the level. I'm not sure if that was the effect it was supposed to create or not.