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[Environmental/short] The Return

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[Environmental/short] The Return
« on: July 02, 2012, 06:36:29 »
The level's title says it all, I wanted to get back into level making after a while and this level was me getting back into the level editor, while using a old texture pack I made a while back. So please leave any feedback about the level.


http://knyttlevels.com/levels/Dron%20-%20The%20Return%20v2.knytt.bin
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Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2012, 10:58:19 »
This is a nice-looking level, I must say.  I don't think the white parts exactly match the rest of the tileset though.  It's a minor gripe, however.

There is one big issue though, that I think you should fix asap:

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Once you fix that issue, I will conduct a full review of the level, as simple and small as it may be.
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Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2012, 19:36:06 »
Quote from: Fubaka on July 02, 2012, 10:58:19
This is a nice-looking level, I must say.  I don't think the white parts exactly match the rest of the tileset though.  It's a minor gripe, however.

There is one big issue though, that I think you should fix asap:

Spoiler: (click to show/hide)

Once you fix that issue, I will conduct a full review of the level, as simple and small as it may be.
Certainly I will get right on that.
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Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2012, 19:33:46 »
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Things to remember when writing figures of speech and sound:
The power of poetry comes from the ability to defy logic. Defy logic often.

Use a metaphor and tell us that your lover is the sky. Tell us that your lover is the sky. When you do that, we won't believe you. We won't believe you because saying so makes no sense, but we'll see a meaning. We'll see a meaning.

The other thing is the ability to be remembered. Love anything.

Love anything
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Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2012, 22:27:33 »
Any specific levels that gave you inspiration for this level ? XD

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Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2012, 23:06:50 »
Quote from: Medic-Ted on July 03, 2012, 22:27:33
Any specific levels that gave you inspiration for this level ? XD


Yea exactly yours! XD
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