The lonely world(beta) download

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The lonely world(beta) download
« on: July 16, 2011, 11:57:40 »
  I am a Chinese,and I can't write more English,have Grammar mistakes.Please point out my mistakes.
  This is my level:






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Offline RichardJ

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Re: The lonely world(beta) download
« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2011, 00:48:27 »
This was a nice level, thanks for making it. The grammar needs a little fixing in the intro: "One day, Juni wake up suddenly found themselves in the wild" ought to be something like "One day, Juni woke up suddenly and found herself in the wild."
At first I didn't like the hidden passages to get to things, but I got used to them quite quickly. In a few places there were animals running off ledges into the air, but it wasn't a big problem. Again, it was fun and I enjoyed it.

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Re: The lonely world(beta) download
« Reply #2 on: July 18, 2011, 21:29:54 »
a decent ks level, nothing special besides funny English and a totally unrelated queen Elisabeth portrait in the info screen.

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