A Sketch--Almost Like Her But Not Her

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A Sketch--Almost Like Her But Not Her
« on: January 03, 2011, 14:50:10 »
I finished this artwork just today, and I am quite proud of it--that I had to show it to someone. I had been reading the Chobits manga and watching the Chobits anime, so I guess it kind of looks like Chii--although it's not her. :D

Here it is!  :oops:


Re: A Sketch--Almost Like Her But Not Her
« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2012, 02:12:12 »
pretty decent, although the eyes look a bit off.  :^^:

I've read chobits, it was really good ><

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Re: A Sketch--Almost Like Her But Not Her
« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2012, 20:59:15 »
cant see cos of the file format... can you upload a different one...?  ;)

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Re: A Sketch--Almost Like Her But Not Her
« Reply #3 on: February 23, 2012, 03:33:14 »
It's really good except for the eyes. Their shape is fine, but their orientation looks like after you finished someone dragged them off center and rotated/transformed them a bit

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Re: A Sketch--Almost Like Her But Not Her
« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2012, 03:50:46 »
Very  good!  I used to draw in manga style a lot. About the eyes, I think the reason why it looks a bit off is because the eye to the right is larger than the other when it should be the reverse. So if you could fix this along with the orientation if would become a very fine piece of work!
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Re: A Sketch--Almost Like Her But Not Her
« Reply #5 on: February 23, 2012, 09:22:24 »
Actually, its not so much that the eye is longer, its more that the right eye follows a different orientation than the eyebrow and the curve to indicate how the forehead is pointing.

You'd be wanting to change the right curve and eyebrow. Rotate them both a little bit and slightly move them up.
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