[Misc/Normal] Oriante

Sure thing!  PM it too me.  Helping with levels is one of my favorite things to do... it part because it takes me so freekin long to make my own levels that I need a sense of accomplishment from other sources. 

I'm a little busy at the moment but, since you say it's a small level, I'm sure I could find an hour or so to run through it and feed back my impressions.

I've pmed you both with the level (possibly accdentally twice...). Thank you!

So thanks to Widget and Headgrinder to testing the level and giving me some thorough and very useful feedback. I think I understand what's wonky about the level, but right now I can't muster the energy or the ideas or the time to bring it up to what I'd like, so I'm releasing the story as is. I still hope I can come back to it later to perfect some aspects of it, and maybe expand it; there's aspects I'm very happy with and there's stuff I find clunky. Regardless: thanks to everyone who commented, and the level release thread is up.