Sorry I've not replied sooner; I wanted to have some progress to report before I did.
My drive has slackened off a bit since my last post. After the last time I played through I set myself the task of bringing all of the cutscenes up to a standard I'm happy with; I've got some very clunky writing in the level at the moment: 2010-Talps didn't believe in second drafts.
So of the twelve cutscenes currently in the game, eight are in need of changes; with some it's simply a case of fixing a few small punctuation or grammatical errors, or rewording the odd paragraph. With others it's a case of scrap the lot and remake every panel with new text and images.
Tedious, but important, especially as some of what I wrote in 2010 contradicts the ending of the game I've written in 2015.
In other news, I also made a really awesome OCO of a certain monster. Its only needed in one screen but I've contrived to find a second home for it, too, because I love it and I want to hug it (only it's covered in big horrible spikes and shoots fire out of its head).
So, happy days. I think that clears my backlog of OCOs that needed to be made to make the game beautiful.
As for the map, I noticed it was down a while ago but didn't feel motivated to reupload it. Since you've asked, however, sure.
I've updated the link in the opening post.