Blue [Normal, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]

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Offline Willster

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Blue [Normal, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« on: June 22, 2010, 00:40:35 »
My first ever level.
Not too good, but it has a secret ending to look for.
Have fun, and please laugh.
(Sorry bout no screenies, I son't know how to make em.)

http://knyttlevels.com/levels/Willster%20-%20Blue.knytt.bin
« Last Edit: June 22, 2010, 22:32:10 by Willster »
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Re: Blue [Easy-Medium, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2010, 12:01:40 »
the [faq] tells you how to make screenshots. :P
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Re: Blue [Normal, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2010, 19:14:09 »



Ta Da 8)
« Last Edit: June 22, 2010, 22:34:18 by Willster »
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Re: Blue [Easy-Medium, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2010, 19:27:29 »
It was an OK first level! Some bits were a bit too challenging for the Easy difficulty rating. I liked the jokes but thought they could be delivered with a bit more, I don't know, style? No offense indended, just personal preference about wording stuff  :oops:

Also, I liked the look of the caves and
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Re: Blue [Easy-Medium, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2010, 21:08:03 »
It's a nice little level. Very short, but fun. I agree with yohji, though. This should be rated Normal, not Easy. There's one jump that is quite difficult to make.
Some KS levels by me:

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Re: Blue [Normal, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2010, 22:31:47 »
Thanks for the feedback. I think that difficulty change is in order, as some of the jumps are a bit hard. I'm a bit of a KS junkie, and only died once, so I thought it was easy. I'm not too good of a jokester, and if a could have made a bigger level, a running theme might of helped. And by style you mean ???
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Re: Blue [Normal, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 22:39:05 »
Either I'm bad or I've never played any platformers but I think some of the jumps are pretty hard.
Mostly the ones where you have to jump right at the edge or you'll bump the ceiling.


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Re: Blue [Normal, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2010, 23:29:23 »
Sorry, when I played through, he glitched himself under the platform. :whoa:
Do you think another level with this style would work? (Like the comedy thrown in?)
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Re: Blue [Normal, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #8 on: June 23, 2010, 10:41:13 »
Yeah, one time I went through that screen the flyer too glitched himself under the platform  C)p By style I mean, I don't know,
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- so like I said, personal preference.

As for comedy-based levels, you might want to look at the recent KS level competition, e.g. this level:
http://nifflas.lpchip.nl/index.php?topic=3535.0
Or, you know, classics such as "Don't Eat the Mushroom" and maybe some other levels, can't think of any right now but I'm sure there were many with comedy thrown in.

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Re: Blue [Normal, Environmental, Humorus, Small Level]
« Reply #9 on: June 25, 2010, 00:49:53 »
Thanks, just got back from camping. Got burned by the sun.
I guess I can't please everyone, so I'll just do my best.
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