Well, this was great! I like the little storyline there!
My only complaint is about the enemy room. The first five times when I died from that room, I went back to the beginning. I made that first jump perfectly the first five times, but after that I just kept on dieing, repeating over and over again. It was really frustrating going back to the beginning, but that was kind of the point, wasn't it? Helped make your point, I guess. Still, great level!