Here is an updated version of the list egomassive made earlier:
* An opening sequence. Establish that Juni is after wood for a fire, and perhaps hinting at the story of the gods.
* At least 2 ending sequences. Juni builds a fire, but the winter continues, vs Juni counteracts the winter god.
* A suggestion to find Wood in the labs.
* A scene with Dr. Wood, furthering the plot, and perhaps receiving something that helps disable the winter.
* Insert all the keys, including the key card to Dr. Wood's big experiment.
* Tie the Ancient tech in the ice caves to the research in the lab.
* An "environmental" path through the "Falling Ice" cave, a way out, and a suggestion to go there.
* Fix areas with messages like, "I don't have a sound card." and, "I ran out of time."
* Add purpose to the underwater section, perhaps fallowing the unofficial demo by Firecat at
http://www.mediafire.com/?g5dnmyrkk9z4vir * Remove waterfalls from trees above water section.
* Add missing labs.
* Voids/SGEs
* Either make time travel region an unrelated and hidden side plot, or rewrite its plot to fit the larger plot (just noticed this is Strieghtflames area, so I'll see if he's ok with it changing and how.)
* Redevelop the room(s) at the end of the lab 3 radiation area to be a more important lab area that helps further the plot.
There where other suggestions and ideas throughout the thread, but some don't fit anymore and I don't have time to sort them right now. There are also no doubt other issues to be added and refined, but I think this list will work fine for now.
As for organizing people to help finish out the level, I'll go ahead and suggest we stay in the format we have now until the majority of the level is complete, then switch to a final format of a few people who will work together to tie together the last details and polish everything off.