Yay, an oldschool KS level! Anyway, good stuff for a first level. I liked the dialogue very much and enjoyed the story; the intro and ending screens were a delight as well.
I found the layout of the level to be a bit clumsy in places. E.g. I stumbled upon the
eye by sheer accident; same goes for the invisible wall/road.
Sometimes all the running about was a bit tedious, since you move around a tiny area, but are forced to take long routes. Still, this is perfectly normal for a first level. Also, I'd say the difficulty level is "normal" rather than easy, especially on the earlier stages of the game.