Nice little level. I loved
the family's reaction to Juni's wall climbing.
Still, I felt like it could use more detail, e.g. what VG suggested about a garden outside, or maybe some pets like a bird or a dog... you know? The library could have some books like you did in
A Day at the Beach... etc. I realize that it had to meet a deadline, but nothing's stopping you from releasing an extended post-competition version later, hm?