My points:
Sergiocornaga (9 Days):
Use of day and night theme: 10/15 (counter was nice, and it was there, but they were rather short days and nights (especially when I barely clipped the corner of day 3 when I was falling).)
Fun: 8/10 (Got frustrating after a while but the music gave great atmosphere and the ending had a really great feeling of triumph.)
My score: 18/25
It's hard to be critical when I have nothing else to compare it to, but well done. It was fun, and pretty. I posted more in the level thread.