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Offline Puppiie

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The Shed Key
« on: October 11, 2009, 06:32:45 »
I'm making a new level called "The Shed Key" and the story line go's like this:

One sunny day Juni and here sister were
playing in their backyard and they wandered
in the old broken shed, then the old latch keeping
the door open broke and the door slammed shut,
But Juni's sister was still inside. (Game starts)

I'll try to work on the level every day and I really want to finish this level X-P
Tell me what you think of the screen shots and the story

Here are the screen shots:
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Offline Razzorman

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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2009, 12:14:51 »
Those are some nice screens.
Nice and simple story too. I am definitely looking forward to this level. :D
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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2009, 16:51:45 »
Quote from: Razzorman on October 11, 2009, 12:14:51
Those are some nice screens.
Nice and simple story too. I am definitely looking forward to this level. :D

Thx X3
This is the first level I ever made too.
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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2009, 18:08:33 »
Same stuff as always. But it's your first level so I wouldn't expect anything much. But screens looks good and all that, just a little basic.  :)

[mod]Removed unnecessary swearing.[/mod]

oh did I swear? I forgot. No swear. Nonononono
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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #4 on: October 12, 2009, 08:30:21 »
Well i look foward to most levels and as this is your first i would like to see how it goes  :D
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« Reply #5 on: January 28, 2010, 21:26:09 »
I'm really looking forward to this level too  :D
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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2010, 16:55:40 »
Wow, this looks nice. :D Can you show us some screens of the surface (if you are able to access it?)
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Offline DesiredRevenge

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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2010, 22:39:54 »
Cool.
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Offline Hmpf

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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #8 on: February 04, 2010, 19:45:02 »
Looks quite nice.
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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #9 on: February 05, 2010, 11:51:28 »
Quite well desinged.
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« Reply #10 on: February 06, 2010, 20:08:36 »
I'm not a huge fan of using background tiles as foreground, especially on a familiar tileset, I think foreground should have a line delimiting it's edge for consistency, apart from in special cases; but apart from that this shows promise and looks way better than most people's first attempts.
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Re: The Shed Key
« Reply #11 on: February 06, 2010, 20:24:42 »
Looks nice ! The story resembles to that of Gustav's Daughter
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