KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]

A little level I'm making. I plan to do one called "Desert" after this one.


Anyway...
Juni and her sister Henna are sailing in a boat, and then they come to a small black island. Henna finds a mysterious light, and both Juni and Henna explore it, then all of a sudden, they are transported to another planet! When Henna comes to, she explores a little, then is kidnapped by monsters. Juni wakes up in cloudlands, covered with snowing weather...

OK I just spoiled the intro...   Oh well.

Story have way to many drastic points, also, thanks for spoiling way to much of the story. Now I won't play it.

Ignore Salmon, he's just being mean. That screen looks great, and I hope the rest of the level turns out just as nicely!

Interesting tileset recolor, but that screenshot has got to be the worst crime against depth perception ever.  Background birds in the foreground?  A waterfall that originates from the very back of the scene and ends at almost the very front?
(For that matter, where's that waterfall even coming from?  There's nothing behind it at all.)

Ignore Salmon, he's just being mean. That screen looks great, and I hope the rest of the level turns out just as nicely!

Thanks.

Interesting tileset recolor, but that screenshot has got to be the worst crime against depth perception ever.  Background birds in the foreground?  A waterfall that originates from the very back of the scene and ends at almost the very front?
(For that matter, where's that waterfall even coming from?  There's nothing behind it at all.)

What's wrong with background birds?
The waterfall doesn't need to have anything behind it.

Oh yeah, I must mention our computer has a little bug that deletes random things. I just hope it doesn't get my level, Dad's going to get something to kill the evil bug.
EDIT: I also have a habit of deleting heaps of things myself...

Looks great. Love the tileset.

What's wrong with background birds?

I think he means the small gray bird in front of the ground.

The waterfall doesn't need to have anything behind it.

The water fall pours over a back ground tile and ends up in front of Juni

This looks pretty good. When you release it, Good luck. Although i do challenge levels, Ill try your level. Don't worry about salmeneous. He said that my level was dull and boring like he have played it 1000 times before. Keep at it. Try your best... Its the max a person can do.

The tileset is, obviously, a remix of NotDesert by Nifflas. I thought blue was a bit better since that is my 2nd favourite color and blue makes me think better...

The bird's in front of the terrain? Gee, I guess I'll pop it where it won't fly though the terrain...

Nice

Anyway, I love that screen!

OK, I'm changing the intro a little. Juni will start in the clouds first.
And don't worry if the room doesn't match the screenshot, just a few small fixes.
And changes to make it look better! 

That's an awesome screen indeed.

can't wait! 
the screen looks really nice!
is this your first level?

can't wait! 
the screen looks really nice!
is this your first level?

Yes. Though I have tried doing "Desert" first, I find myself deleting THAT and doing this one. *shrug*
And I do actually hope I do finish this one. I always delete the others for no reason... oh well, I am just like that.

Just did the Intro... and a few more rooms.