[easy-environmental-small/medium-ish]ice

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Offline inky84

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[easy-environmental-small/medium-ish]ice
« on: July 10, 2009, 02:19:47 »
I wanted to make a small environmental  level, about some world similar to Antarctica.
Considering I live in New Zealand, I know quite a lot, so that helps.

no real plot yet, but I'll be sure to add one.

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« Last Edit: July 19, 2009, 01:48:23 by inky84 »

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #1 on: July 10, 2009, 02:30:54 »
It looks alright, but it could maybe use some more decoration. I realize it's supposed to be desolate and lifeless, but it looks a bit boring as it is. A custom tileset would benefit this level a lot, check out the old forum for some good ones.

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #2 on: July 10, 2009, 02:49:52 »
Looks good. The whatever in the second screen seem a bit too abundant, though.
Lurk more.

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 03:00:29 »
Did you mean the background birds? because yes.
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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #4 on: July 10, 2009, 03:22:56 »
the terrible boat?

sure, I can remove it XD

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #5 on: July 10, 2009, 05:36:43 »
Not the boat, the birds. There are too many.

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2009, 05:51:25 »
Not the boat, the birds. There are too many.
WAY too many. O_o

Also, I'd like to second the idea of adding more detail. The first screen's pretty bare as is.

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2009, 09:03:16 »
You should make the penguins move...
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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #8 on: July 10, 2009, 09:46:45 »
I would love to see custom tileset in this level.

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #9 on: July 10, 2009, 10:52:44 »
sure, I suppose I could ^^

i'm on holiday, so I'll work on it then, but I will have no internet, so requests right now will help.
I've also halved the amount of birds you see in those screens

(note: the penguin-like creatures are co's at different speeds, so it looks like they're all shuffling around ^^)

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #10 on: July 10, 2009, 11:53:40 »
I hope the wait is worth waiting for :P

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #11 on: July 10, 2009, 22:51:07 »
The birds are awesome.
I think that everything is already clear, isn`t it? More details, a better boat...
It owuld be cool to have something like an transparent Ice-cave or something like that, you could use CO`s to create a really cool one, just so you know.
And I would love to see some Eskimos =D
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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #12 on: July 18, 2009, 10:38:44 »
The birds are awesome.
I think that everything is already clear, isn`t it? More details, a better boat...
It owuld be cool to have something like an transparent Ice-cave or something like that, you could use CO`s to create a really cool one, just so you know.
And I would love to see some Eskimos =D
I was on holiday, so I had hours of private time to work on this.

I've made some CO's, some custom enemies and all those tricks, and I've used as little, but as much as I could to create a more detailed, but still empty space.

Here's some new screenshots:
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I modified this one (see first post)
the other one has one or two small "visual" bugs I haven't yet attended to.
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these two are new.
oh, and vinterrun: It's a knytt equivalent of the antarctic. no Eskimos.

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Re: [easy-environmental-small]ice
« Reply #13 on: July 19, 2009, 00:21:31 »
MUCH better. This is looking like something I'll want to play. :D

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Re: [easy-environmental-small/medium-ish]ice
« Reply #14 on: July 19, 2009, 03:56:27 »
To be honest I preferred the old screenshots; these new ones are very cluttered, and, as such, not really appealing.

I'd really suggest making a custom tileset to replace that default winter one; it hardly needs to be very fancy, since you are, after all, going for a feeling of emptiness.