The beginning of the album, I feel, sounds a bit too much like Nifflas' work. However, you do make up for it in the middle with some solid melodies.
The heavy use of ambiance reminds me of my own work, which is ironic, since the last major release I advertised around here is also heavily inspired by Knytt Stories. I think you'd enjoy Deparct.
Shameless plug aside, I think you dun good. The only thing I would suggest for next time is to expand your instrumentation. Up to you, though.