Some thoughts and questions...
Not something that could (or should) change now, but I really think it should have been Prologue A, Prologue B and Story, rather than Chapter 1, 2 and 3. The change is scope when starting chapter 3 really threw me off.
Loved the story. Wasn't too keen on having Nicklas self-insert as part of the story but otherwise everything worked for me. I typically let Cilia speak for me and I enjoyed the responses except for one thing...
The tails / wangleflower story line was interesting but Cilia's response at the end appalled me. To say he should just happily go back to the other despite her effectively mind-altering him is terrifying. I can't understand why Cilia would just say "it all ends well". Felt uncomfortably like telling a date-rape drug survivor that his/her attacker isn't really so bad.
I found every room, collected every coin / object (the only symbols left on the map are o, S and T), translated every pixie speech, finished the challenge rooms ("shape space"?) found the "other" map and found alpha and beta. Any suggestions what I should try next?
Things I know I still have to do...
* Figure out the disorder well enough to do the shortcut challenge
* Check out the bonus levels (I've done a couple)
* Presumably gamma, delta, epsilon and zeta are out there somewhere and I just missed them
Finally some left overs. Not sure if these mean I missed something or if they are supposed to remain open ended...
Do the puzzle piece collection and sun/moon stone collection have any purpose?
What are the two slots besides the map device for?
Was Dora's dream / owl mask god actually linked to anything or just a throw-away?
And, to close, great game
I would recommend to anyone, *but* I would recommend they play both WaDF and Knytt Stories first.