[Challenge maybe hard] Travelling the seas

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I'm working in a level, its name is Travelling the sea (or seas)
Story:
"Juni it's an explorer that works for a map designer, Thomas Maperson. One day, Juni receives a mail saying that she must go to the dock at 8:30. She finds a guy with an airship and joins with him, Juni and her new "Friend" landed (Crashed) in a island where is the "Temple of Lazewind". unfortunately, the temple is closed with a door that open only with some (5) pieces. So juni and her friend must go to a lots of islands for the pieces of the door." I'm thinking in a plot twist, but its a secret .

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So... i keep working on it, and also i use the new CO addition  .

Screens:
1. The dock and the airship.
2. The "Temple of Lazewind" door.
3. A underwater temple on Crystal Lake.
4. A geotermic plant in a volcano.

I remember this. The screens look great. I do hope the difficulty is hard. I like hard.
Sorry about that pintless post. I believe this is going to turn into a marvelous level. The story sounds great, and the screens are well thought up. Hope all goes well. Perhaps you are nearly done?

Ah, yes, I remember this. Oh, and on the last screen, it would be more correct to say, "Authorization needed," "Authorized Personnell Only," or "No Entry Without Permission."

EDIT: I like the third screen. :3

Yeah, it's saaaaaafe.

LOL.

Looking really good so far. :3

Ah, yes, I remember this. Oh, and on the last screen, it would be more correct to say, "Authorization needed," "Authorized Personnell Only," or "No Entry Without Permission."

Or with the original syntax: No one without permission is allowed beyond this point.

Quote from: Pumpkinbot on March 21, 2009, 06:14:30

Ah, yes, I remember this. Oh, and on the last screen, it would be more correct to say, "Authorization needed," "Authorized Personnell Only," or "No Entry Without Permission."

Or with the original syntax: No one without permission is allowed beyond this point.

That, too.

How about a simple "KEEP OUT"?

Or how about everyone stops criticizing the level and starts complimenting it.

AIRSHIP!!!  

I remember this. The screens look great. I do hope the difficulty is hard. I like hard.
Sorry about that pintless post. I believe this is going to turn into a marvelous level. The story sounds great, and the screens are well thought up. Hope all goes well. Perhaps you are nearly done?

Errrm...  no, but it's progressing good so far.Im working in a new concept that runs with the CO?s.

Quote from: Pumpkinbot on March 21, 2009, 06:14:30

Ah, yes, I remember this. Oh, and on the last screen, it would be more correct to say, "Authorization needed," "Authorized Personnell Only," or "No Entry Without Permission."

Or with the original syntax: No one without permission is allowed beyond this point.

Thank you to all :3.

How about a simple "KEEP OUT"?

Its sounds more "Clever" with the other way  .

Yeah, it's saaaaaafe.

LOL.

Looking really good so far. :3

The complete dialog is:

Juni- Wow. One more question, Is the airship safe?
Guy- Ermmm... ummm.... Yeah, its saaaaaaaaaaaaaaafe.

Thanks everyone for the comments  .

Nice it looks like the gaia but its awsome !!