Yeah, it looks much better now
Not bad for your first try. Yours is the first icy themed level I have played... I like the atmosphere. The graphics could use a bit more work, though. The level doesn't look bad, but it would look a lot better if you added more detail (backgrounds, more shades of ice blocks...).
Speaking about backgrounds... that gradient doesn't match the background color of the tileset. Not sure if this is what you intended, but it looks weird.
Also...
The animation for that strange creature at x1004y999 can be done with custom objects, instead of replicating the same screen multiple times and using shifts. Check
this thread if you want to learn more about that. It's a very useful technique :)
Oh, and here's a list of screens that should be filled in order to prevent "void" screens while playing:
* x1007y1000: You can get up to there if you double-jump and climb the wall on the screen just below.
* x1010y1000: Reachable if you do a simple double-jump from the screen below.
* x1011y1000: Same as before.
Anyway, congratulations on finishing and releasing your first level