A Sketch--Almost Like Her But Not Her

I finished this artwork just today, and I am quite proud of it--that I had to show it to someone. I had been reading the Chobits manga and watching the Chobits anime, so I guess it kind of looks like Chii--although it's not her.

Here it is! 

pretty decent, although the eyes look a bit off. 

I've read chobits, it was really good ><

cant see cos of the file format... can you upload a different one...? 

It's really good except for the eyes. Their shape is fine, but their orientation looks like after you finished someone dragged them off center and rotated/transformed them a bit

Very  good!  I used to draw in manga style a lot. About the eyes, I think the reason why it looks a bit off is because the eye to the right is larger than the other when it should be the reverse. So if you could fix this along with the orientation if would become a very fine piece of work!

Actually, its not so much that the eye is longer, its more that the right eye follows a different orientation than the eyebrow and the curve to indicate how the forehead is pointing.

You'd be wanting to change the right curve and eyebrow. Rotate them both a little bit and slightly move them up.