[Challenge][Hard]The Elders' Request

I saw the thread in the KS board regarding Nurykabe's confusing tilesets. One of them, triforium, I used in my first level ever, The Elder's Request. I never finished it, though I posted a demo on the old forum, to which Goog replied that it was good, but needed lotsa work. I was inspired, so I'm re-vamping it. Meaning moar vampires.* I'm still working on TLi(S)U, though, so don't get worried. The first pic is from the original version, and the second one is the new version. I can haz comments and criticism?
*Those that mention Twilight will be shot.

Oh, yah, story.

First thing that sprung to mind for the second one was the temple of the Ancients from FFVII... Kinda like a confusing twilight zone. Always nice to look at.

I'll be looking forward to trying this once it's done!

First thing that sprung to mind for the second one was the temple of the Ancients from FFVII... Kinda like a confusing twilight zone. Always nice to look at.

I'll be looking forwardto trying this once it's done!

/run shotgun.exe
Other than that, thanks.

The dull vs cluttered contrast of the screens looks rather awkward, but I suppose that's okay.

Also, twilight isn't the only vampire related thing out there. Just the most awesome.

twilight isn't the only vampire related thing out there. Just the most awesome.

BLAM!

I like this level's design, I have yet to see a level that tileset in a nice and interesting way. 
good luck!

WOAH. That is all there is to say. Oh and when you said revamping it reminded me of Twilight. *Shot*
Really though this looks awsome and surreal.

New screenshot? Great. Confusing, but in an interesting way. Old screenshot? Meh. So: hell yeah for the revamp!

The second screen is very creative. I hope to see some more.

           YEY!
  CONFUSING

           YEY!
  CONFUSING

YIPPEH! But I can't find a tileset I can use for the second screen, a forest area. Yes, that's all I have. ;A;