Long time no post! Oh yeah, and I'm working on a song

Hey! It's been a while. I've been inactive since (at least I feel) things have sorta been winding down. Although, I expect to become more active once NG is released into the open.

Anyway, I'm writing a song as a project for my music class. It hasn't been completely finished, though (length-wise, pretty much; "perfection"-wise, not really). So, I've been looking for some suggestions as to how to improve it, and I figured the nifforum (as well as facebook) would be a good place. I'm also looking for a name!

Find it here: Very Long URL

NJOY

Holy crap it's Chironex!
(I used to be DragonMC)

Anyway, must listen to this later.

Its a really nice song, but I think the lead synth is a bit too "stingy" in lack of a better word. (my music terminology is pretty much as bad as it can get.)
Also, drums are not bad! You should try to use them.

Hmmm. I'm not sure what you mean by stingy. You mean, like, too many overtones? Too grating?


Also---I'm planning on adding drums. Keep in mind, this is only the "beta" version.