a small bit of literature.

I haven't been on for a while guys, sorry for that. I've been trying to learn C, so I could then step into Objective C and then the world of iPod app developers. Work on Night will be stalled, I may resume later, but I don't know if I'lll feel the drive to complete once my start my app project. Anywhoo, let's step into the water already, shall we?

War : http://mattthesage.deviantart.com/art/War-120356405

Age of Gears Prologue : http://mattthesage.deviantart.com/art/Age-of-Gears-Prologue-120353413

Critique would be nice, but I don't think I will change my War piece, unless it has to do with grammatical errors.

I like it! You're really eloquent, too bad the link for your "Age of Gears Prologue" is broken

In War you better call the fallen angel Lucifer, not Satan. That would sound more powerful. (check out the attachment)