[Small][Hard] Monsters!

I was worried at first when I saw how many monsters you were using on each screen, but skill was the main factor rather than luck.

This is important, you need to credit the graphics and music. It's one of Nifflas' rules. I looked them up for you.
Tilesets by: Nifflas, Elder
Music by: Nurykabe, dfast
You could add them to your info screen.

It says to give music credit here. Scroll down to where it says, "Giving Credits"

Not a bad level. Pretty good for a first effort. I was worried at first when I saw how many monsters you were using on each screen, but skill was the main factor rather than luck. Save point spacing was good. Graphics were plain but sensible. Cutscenes, the icon, and the info screen were all there! I only played for fun and I didn't run into any swimming or voiding.

Spoiler: My only complaints are... (click to show/hide)

Why does the town warp when you head right? It's just bizarre. It'd be nice to see a visual clue that the pits will kill you. I assumed they did, but I had to jump in to make sure I wasn't missing anything. All I found was hot death.

This is important, you need to credit the graphics and music. It's one of Nifflas' rules. I looked them up for you.
Tilesets by: Nifflas, Elder
Music by: Nurykabe, dfast
You could add them to your info screen.

Again, its a nice little level. Its very nice for a first effort.

Quote from: egomassive on June 25, 2010, 23:41:44

I was worried at first when I saw how many monsters you were using on each screen, but skill was the main factor rather than luck.

I had the same thought at the start (screens with a lot of monsters tend to create situations where the player has to rely on luck rather than skill, and it becomes frustrating quickly), but egomassive's right. It's a fun level. It is also very polished (no void screens/wall-swims, cutscenes, etc). Graphics are a bit simple (there are a few screens that feel a bit empty), but they're OK. You did very good on your first try

Enhorabuena por la publicación de tu primer nivel. Esperamos ver pronto tus futuros trabajos

Spoiler: changes I'd make (click to show/hide)

I'd put water across the pits. Its consistent with your earlier screens. At the pit below the updrafts you might want to add a screen below that one with lava at the bottom. Lava could explain the updrafts.

I discovered a void. If you skip the ghost eye you can slip through where the ghost objects appear. I also suggest changing the bouncer to something that doesn't require a ground tile. Hitting the invisible tile when you skip the ghost eye feels wrong. I don't know why anyone would skip the ghost eye, but people do the strangest things.

I wouldn't say "epic." I can't imagine someone running into those voids unless they were trying to break the game.