My Random, Boring Music

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Offline Lunar Moss

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My Random, Boring Music
« on: March 22, 2010, 16:13:31 »
Yeah, so title says it all, basically. I made this song in Reason 4 at my school. It's the first time I've used Reason, ever, and it's been a while since I did any electronic composition. It's definitely not a polished effort, but here it is for some criticism anyway. Be prepared, it might be a bit rough around the edges.

EDIT: Here's the link again, just in case the hyperlink in the paragraph above was too hard to see: http://soundcloud.com/for-et-de-tranquillite/hills-in-grey
Also noticed that it's pretty quiet, so sorry for that. Give your volume knobs some exercise.
« Last Edit: March 22, 2010, 16:22:29 by Lunar Moss »
In the moon, the stars, the streetlights,
In satellites.
In the sun, the sky, the headlights,
In airplanes.
In the dark, the cold, the damp,
In rainbows.

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Re: My Random, Boring Music
« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2010, 07:54:11 »
I think it's great. Althought the beat coming in after the 2 minutes doesn't quite fit in. It destroys the nice calmity of the track.

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Re: My Random, Boring Music
« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2010, 17:00:25 »
Its pretty good, but the drums should either kick in a lot earlier, or be much slower.
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