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Title: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 06, 2015, 01:24:30
(http://vegetal.eb-creativos.com/ksstuff/sshot/catacombs_preview.png)

Type: Environmental/Challenge
Difficulty: Easy
Size: Small

[ Download link (http://knyttlevels.com/levels/Vegetal%20Gibber%20-%20Curse%20of%20the%20Catacombs.knytt.bin) ]

This is mostly an environmental level with a side of exploration-based challenge (just power-up collecting and some platforming, no enemies/traps) and a dark/creepy theme. It also features a simple story with two different endings, although only one of them will reveal the details.

This level was inspired on the awesome (but unfortunately abandoned) "Valley of Dry Bones" community tileset project, which I have extended with extra wall/ground tiles, shadows and some other additions. I've attached the modified tileset to this post, feel free to download and use it in your own projects. Note that there are still a few empty tiles, so there's a bit of room for further additions.

It runs in vanilla KS with no mods, but KS+ with single-pass rendering enabled is recommended for the best experience.

Spoiler: Credits (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Screenshots (click to show/hide)

Hope you guys enjoy it. Any feedback would be appreciated!
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: egomassive on September 06, 2015, 05:52:03
Terrific level! My favorite part was the little red CO that worked with the skull terrain. I struggled a while with that terrain when I drew it, and I was never completely happy with the end product. You made it and all the other pieces of that abandoned tileset shine. There were may great spooky ideas here, and you made it all in such a short time. I'm impressed.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: plural on September 06, 2015, 10:19:12
Really nice little level, great small graphical touches that give a remarkable amount of atmosphere to the level. Also, even for the static nature of the cutscenes in the game, the intro cutscene had a nice fluidity to the movement, so to speak, from frame to frame.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: sergiocornaga on September 06, 2015, 13:50:39
This level is a real treat. I too thought the opening cutscene was great, the sound effects made it so dynamic. I loved where you hid the blue key, and that maze of spinal cords at the end was fantastically creepy.

It doesn't matter too much, but your use of the big bones in the tileset is a little inconsistent. Sometimes they're solid and sometimes they're not without visual differentiation. Speaking of those bones, one of the tiles (second row, middle) has a black line on the right side despite having a crack in it. I think this might be an unintentional error from when Polana was working on it since that line used to be right up against a dark brown blank tile, meaning I didn't notice it until now. Unless you like how it looks, I think you could get away with fixing it yourself.

I also would have liked to have seen collisions for the spinal cords that better matched how the tiles looked. You might have noticed that in an earlier version of the tileset, I made an invisible collision tile for this purpose that I now kind of wish had stuck around (since the makeshift collisions I added directly to the spinal cord tiles aren't quite adequate sometimes). It's possible implementing something like this would mess up some of your platforming challenges, though.

I also found that I saw occasional flashes even though I was using KS+ with single-pass rendering. What's up with that (egomassive)?
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: egomassive on September 06, 2015, 14:59:06
I also found that I saw occasional flashes even though I was using KS+ with single-pass rendering. What's up with that (egomassive)?
I've come to believe that the underlying engine has some sort of multi-threading behavior which allows it to give inconsistent results. However it works, there is no documentation to clue in programmers, so we have to do ugly things to make it behave itself. The Custom Objects are an add-on which is also a black box to programmers. Their inner-workings are unknowable and unchangeable. In short, I did my best.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: LPChip on September 06, 2015, 17:29:50
Played the level, as it was labeled easy and small. Fun level. Found 2 keys, but never was able to use them. Did a bit more exploring after ending, but only found one ending.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Comhon on September 06, 2015, 21:35:45
I enjoyed playing this level. Great work!
There is a really good atmosphere, during playing I really felt being in a big catacomb maze and having no way out...
Spoiler: ending (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 07, 2015, 00:18:19
Thanks for the feedback and the kind words, guys!

@egomassive: I'm happy I could give this great tileset a chance :) I started this as a side project, but I ended focusing almost entirely on this until it was done, so development went surprisingly quick. Gotta act when inspiration strikes :P2

@plural: Glad you liked the cutscene :) I took a similar approach before in the secret ending of Tomatoes, but this is the first time I used it in a more elaborate story. It's hard for me to do proper narrative in English, so I prefer this wordless way to convey the story.

@sergiocornaga: It's true that climbing on the spine tiles feels a bit "floaty" due to the full tile collision mask. I did see your post about the invisible tile, but I found about it after I had finished building the level. I'll probably address this on a future update, when I get the chance. I can also use the empty space on the tileset to create background versions of the bones, to make the experience more consistent.

@LPChip: Glad you gave it a try! Here's how you can get the second ending, if you're interested:

Spoiler: "Truth" ending (click to show/hide)

@Comhon: Thanks, atmosphere was my main focus here, so it's nice to know I succeeded in making the player feel that way :D

Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Fubaka on September 07, 2015, 05:38:59
This is about as effective a use for that unfinished bones tileset as I could have imagined.

Lovely atmosphere as usual! You always know how to deliver on those COs! Great level design as well!

I'm glad the level wasn't Challenge based, apart from whatever jumps need performing. The spookiness is further solidified because of it.

Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 07, 2015, 12:59:43
Thanks Fubaka, glad you enjoyed the level :)

I was tempted to include a few actual challenges on the second ending path, but I decided against it for the same reason you explained. Having the character die multiple times and come back instantly with no consequences would pretty much cancel the effect of the spooky atmosphere.

Spoiler: Second ending bug (click to show/hide)

I noticed the contradiction with the water right after posting the level on the board, and boy, did I feel stupid! :P2  I chose to leave it as is for now, but I'll probably replace that water with a different type and block the access in the revised version, to make it feel more consistent.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: pfrangip on September 07, 2015, 15:47:33
Well, I enjoyed the level. I loved the opening cutscene (I especially liked the pixel art of the wet Juni staggered against a bone.) but I was unimpressed with the level design at first. However, there's a certain amount of "creepy tension" that builds throughout the level, and culminating in the "secret" ending that scared me a bit. I really enjoyed the COs, I also really liked how you had the red detector going off in the secret path. The atmosphere was clearly the best part of this level, and since that's what you were going for, I think you definitely succeeded.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 08, 2015, 01:06:47
Thanks for the feedback!

Spoiler: About the red light (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Talps on September 08, 2015, 19:48:44
That was fun, and looked fantastic! I loved all the COs in this; they added a huge level of depth and immersion.

I found all 4 keys and the secret ending easily enough, which doesn't bother me; I quickly run out of patience in levels where the secrets are too arbitrarily hidden (Fubaka, that passage you complained about in 'Dragon Myth' is clearly marked if you come at it from the right angle!)

I especially loved the hidden door; I felt like a genius when I found that! 8D

Actually I have one complaint. I got the blue key with only the double-jump; I got into its hiding place easily but getting out again was so hard that I almost gave up on the level, thinking I was actually trapped.

Also, like Sergio said, I was disappointed by the collision of the spines, though I sympathise that that's a really hard problem to rectify. If it were me I probably would have left then as they were and let the player struggle up them, though perhaps yoursd the better solution.

On the other hand, I loved how you used the red sensor blocks in the secret passage.

All in all I thought the level was great. :D Well done!
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 09, 2015, 11:11:57
Glad you liked the level, Talps :) Thanks for the feedback.

Based on what you and Fubaka said, I think I'm going to modify the access to the blue key a bit so that area cannot be reached without using the umbrella. Seems like it's just too tempting for experienced players to try and get in there as soon as possible X) This should prevent situations like the one you described, and also fix the issue with the umbrella in the "Truth" ending.

I think I can modify the collision mask on the spine tiles using invisible pixels to improve the climbing without resorting to invisible objects. I'll try this in version 2.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: sergiocornaga on September 09, 2015, 12:48:52
I think I can modify the collision mask on the spine tiles using invisible pixels to improve the climbing without resorting to invisible objects. I'll try this in version 2.

OK, but keep in mind that the spine tiles already have an invisible collision mask. There's not a lot you can do to it other than extending parts of it out by a few pixels so that the entire thing is one straight line, but given how curvy the spine tiles are, Juni will still often look like she's climbing on air.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 09, 2015, 17:26:23
OK, but keep in mind that the spine tiles already have an invisible collision mask. There's not a lot you can do to it other than extending parts of it out by a few pixels so that the entire thing is one straight line, but given how curvy the spine tiles are, Juni will still often look like she's climbing on air.

Yeah, I checked again and it seems the bottom part of the spine doesn't leave me much room for adjusting the collision mask. The fact that most of the spines I put in the level have a skull on top certainly doesn't help. I'll experiment a bit to see which option offers the best results without affecting the gameplay too much. If possible, I'd like to let the player climb the entire thing in a single go (skull included) rather than requiring multiple jumps, especially on the final maze.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Healy on September 10, 2015, 01:53:56
This was pretty cool. A nice, scary level to play before Halloween.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 10, 2015, 13:27:59
Thanks Healy!  I did indeed consider keeping the finished level a secret and wait until mid October before releasing it... but I just don't have the necessary patience to pull off something like that :P2
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: CWolvie on September 15, 2015, 19:37:12
Very interesting small level. I also like its graphic. The bones theme is very well done :).
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 17, 2015, 01:10:58
Thanks CWolvie :D  I'm glad I could do justice to the original tileset.

I still want to address the issues with the blue key area and the spine bones. Hopefully I'll be able to work on a new version soon.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: McGloomy on September 17, 2015, 19:23:25
Wow, that was creepy!

Spoiler: (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on September 25, 2015, 13:24:00
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the level :)
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Purple Ink on October 09, 2015, 03:24:37
This was a great level. Really loved the atmosphere of it all. The "freedom" ending was a little of an anticlimax for me but I think the "truth" ending more than made up for it. Really well done level. :)
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: David C on November 04, 2015, 07:12:05
i just played this, really enjoyed it, it felt very purposeful in its approach with how stuff was placed and the flow between getting new powerups
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Tszemix on November 05, 2015, 17:00:38
Thank God there are people still making awesome KS levels!  :D :D :D
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on February 28, 2016, 21:06:30
I've made a small update to this level before I finally release it on KnyttLevels.com. It fixes some issues and adds special optimizations and bonuses for KS+ (while still being playable on vanilla KS).

[ Curse of the Catacombs v1.1 (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/47886996/knytt/Vegetal%20Gibber%20-%20Curse%20of%20the%20Catacombs.knytt.bin) ]

Spoiler: Changelog for v1.1 (click to show/hide)

Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: yohji on February 29, 2016, 01:37:12
Wow, this made me nostalgic - feels so much like the classic KS levels I played all those years ago. I enjoyed the atmosphere and the gameplay immensely. Great job!
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on February 29, 2016, 16:18:07
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: CWolvie on February 29, 2016, 19:34:50
Thanks for updating to this beautiful level! :) I am also thinking of updating Save the high jump, but I...need...more...time. :sigh:
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: egomassive on March 01, 2016, 15:17:59
I didn't notice too many differences in the new version, but it's been a long time since I played through. I found some bugs! When entering x996y1000 through the door, you can find yourself swimming in a skull. On the right side of x1006y997 the 2 stacked skulls are not solid.
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Vegetal Gibber on March 01, 2016, 19:49:58
@CWolvie: That'd be pretty neat! Or maybe it's time for the sequel, Save the Double Jump :D

@egomassive: Well, v1.1 was just a small update to fix some problems and add a few extra details here and there. The only new stuff you might notice is...

Spoiler: Minor ending spoilers (click to show/hide)

Anyway, thanks for reporting these issues! I've put together another minor update that fixes them and adds a few more KS+ bonuses:

[ Curse of the Catacombs v1.2 (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/47886996/knytt/Vegetal%20Gibber%20-%20Curse%20of%20the%20Catacombs.knytt.bin) ]

Spoiler: Changelog for v1.2 (click to show/hide)

Hopefully this will be the final version of the level, unless more errors are found.

Actually, I was considering adding an extra area (making use of the hologram, the only power-up I didn't put in the level) in the v1.1 update. I even started a new tileset for it, but in the end I decided against it. I think this concept works best as a short, cohesive experience, and what I was planning would have felt too out of place. I'll probably use that new tileset in a future level, though. I hate it when assets are left unused! :P2
Title: Re: [Environmental/Challenge] [Easy] [Small] Curse of the Catacombs
Post by: Purple Ink on March 06, 2016, 20:26:13
Played this again because of the update. I have to admit that I got lost trying to find the freedom ending after getting the truth ending. lol