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Temporary => Knytt Stories Level Releases => Topic started by: Dron233 on July 02, 2012, 06:36:29

Title: [Environmental/short] The Return
Post by: Dron233 on July 02, 2012, 06:36:29

The level's title says it all, I wanted to get back into level making after a while and this level was me getting back into the level editor, while using a old texture pack I made a while back. So please leave any feedback about the level.


http://knyttlevels.com/levels/Dron%20-%20The%20Return%20v2.knytt.bin
[Fixed void]

Title: Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
Post by: Fubaka on July 02, 2012, 10:58:19

This is a nice-looking level, I must say.  I don't think the white parts exactly match the rest of the tileset though.  It's a minor gripe, however.

There is one big issue though, that I think you should fix asap:

Spoiler: (click to show/hide)

On screen x999 y1000, after obtaining the high jump powerup, you are able to jump off the edge of the level into a void.  You should add another screen there (at x998 y1000) to fix that.

Once you fix that issue, I will conduct a full review of the level, as simple and small as it may be.

Title: Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
Post by: Dron233 on July 02, 2012, 19:36:06

Quote from: Fubaka on July 02, 2012, 10:58:19

This is a nice-looking level, I must say.  I don't think the white parts exactly match the rest of the tileset though.  It's a minor gripe, however.

There is one big issue though, that I think you should fix asap:

Spoiler: (click to show/hide)

On screen x999 y1000, after obtaining the high jump powerup, you are able to jump off the edge of the level into a void.  You should add another screen there (at x998 y1000) to fix that.

Once you fix that issue, I will conduct a full review of the level, as simple and small as it may be.

Certainly I will get right on that.

Title: Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
Post by: Fubaka on July 03, 2012, 19:33:46

Here is my formal review!

http://nifflas.lpchip.nl/index.php?topic=5404.msg58068#msg58068 (http://nifflas.lpchip.nl/index.php?topic=5404.msg58068#msg58068)

Title: Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
Post by: Medic-Ted on July 03, 2012, 22:27:33

Any specific levels that gave you inspiration for this level ? XD

Title: Re: [Environmental/short] The Return
Post by: Dron233 on July 03, 2012, 23:06:50

Quote from: Medic-Ted on July 03, 2012, 22:27:33

Any specific levels that gave you inspiration for this level ? XD

Yea exactly yours! XD