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Level Editing Support => Knytt Stories Level Previews => Topic started by: Londeea on October 01, 2009, 09:21:45

Title: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 01, 2009, 09:21:45
A little level I'm making. I plan to do one called "Desert" after this one.
(http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/2830/image1nq.png)

Anyway...
Juni and her sister Henna are sailing in a boat, and then they come to a small black island. Henna finds a mysterious light, and both Juni and Henna explore it, then all of a sudden, they are transported to another planet! When Henna comes to, she explores a little, then is kidnapped by monsters. Juni wakes up in cloudlands, covered with snowing weather...

OK I just spoiled the intro...  :oops: Oh well.
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Salmoneous on October 01, 2009, 16:16:06
Story have way to many drastic points, also, thanks for spoiling way to much of the story. Now I won't play it.
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Pick Yer Poison on October 01, 2009, 18:30:33
Ignore Salmon, he's just being mean. That screen looks great, and I hope the rest of the level turns out just as nicely! :)
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: minmay on October 01, 2009, 20:00:43
Interesting tileset recolor, but that screenshot has got to be the worst crime against depth perception ever.  Background birds in the foreground?  A waterfall that originates from the very back of the scene and ends at almost the very front?
(For that matter, where's that waterfall even coming from?  There's nothing behind it at all.)
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 02, 2009, 00:05:23
Ignore Salmon, he's just being mean. That screen looks great, and I hope the rest of the level turns out just as nicely! :)

Thanks.

Interesting tileset recolor, but that screenshot has got to be the worst crime against depth perception ever.  Background birds in the foreground?  A waterfall that originates from the very back of the scene and ends at almost the very front?
(For that matter, where's that waterfall even coming from?  There's nothing behind it at all.)

What's wrong with background birds?
The waterfall doesn't need to have anything behind it.

Oh yeah, I must mention our computer has a little bug that deletes random things. I just hope it doesn't get my level, Dad's going to get something to kill the evil bug.
EDIT: I also have a habit of deleting heaps of things myself...
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Purple Pineapple on October 02, 2009, 01:25:50
Looks great. Love the tileset.

What's wrong with background birds?
I think he means the small gray bird in front of the ground.

The waterfall doesn't need to have anything behind it.
The water fall pours over a back ground tile and ends up in front of Juni
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: PeppyHare4000 on October 02, 2009, 02:48:01
This looks pretty good. When you release it, Good luck. Although i do challenge levels, Ill try your level. Don't worry about salmeneous. He said that my level was dull and boring like he have played it 1000 times before. Keep at it. Try your best... Its the max a person can do.
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 02, 2009, 05:16:40
The tileset is, obviously, a remix of NotDesert by Nifflas. I thought blue was a bit better since that is my 2nd favourite color and blue makes me think better...

The bird's in front of the terrain? Gee, I guess I'll pop it where it won't fly though the terrain...
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Comhon on October 02, 2009, 09:50:40
Nice
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Pumpkinbot on October 02, 2009, 16:01:03
Anyway, I love that screen! :awsum:
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 03, 2009, 08:00:19
OK, I'm changing the intro a little. Juni will start in the clouds first.
And don't worry if the room doesn't match the screenshot, just a few small fixes.
And changes to make it look better!  ;)
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Razzorman on October 03, 2009, 12:13:49
That's an awesome screen indeed. :D
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: bunnrey on October 04, 2009, 04:13:11
can't wait!  :)
the screen looks really nice!
is this your first level?
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 05, 2009, 08:13:57
can't wait!  :)
the screen looks really nice!
is this your first level?

Yes. Though I have tried doing "Desert" first, I find myself deleting THAT and doing this one. *shrug*
And I do actually hope I do finish this one. I always delete the others for no reason... oh well, I am just like that.
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 07, 2009, 02:18:35
Just did the Intro... and a few more rooms.
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Strange Darkness on October 07, 2009, 12:44:28
Interesting tileset recolor, but that screenshot has got to be the worst crime against depth perception ever.  Background birds in the foreground?  A waterfall that originates from the very back of the scene and ends at almost the very front?
(For that matter, where's that waterfall even coming from?  There's nothing behind it at all.)
Ahem its called surrealism if i believe not everything has to be norma....o colours!
anyway  C)p hopefully everything goes well with this level
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 08, 2009, 05:30:00
Heh, thanks...
OK, I'm not sure why exactly but Juni is teleported to a grasslands... I just don't know WHY I'm just changing it... oh well.
Anyway sorry itt's taking a long time to do, I'm getting a little bored, and plus I keep deleting it for no reason at all... gee, what is wrong with me.  O_o
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Strange Darkness on October 08, 2009, 11:40:16
Heh, thanks...
OK, I'm not sure why exactly but Juni is teleported to a grasslands... I just don't know WHY I'm just changing it... oh well.
Anyway sorry itt's taking a long time to do, I'm getting a little bored, and plus I keep deleting it for no reason at all... gee, what is wrong with me.  O_o
Maybe deep down inside you hate it and your sub-conscously deleting it  :nuts:
Also i can wait for the level (as well as the rest of us) no rush  ;)
Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 09, 2009, 01:24:29
Heheh, thanks. Oh, did I mention it was a FOREST?
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Title: Re: KS Level - Another World [Under Construction]
Post by: Londeea on October 12, 2009, 04:55:40
*sigh* Now I just don't have the mind to make this anymore... if you get something different, don't be surprised. I'll still try to make it, but, still, it'll take time. Anyways it'll be far different from what you'll expect. This doesn't really mean I won't make it, just delay it a little.