Beatufiul, terrific, etc.; wonderful job. Fantastic tilesets, design... Definitely keep them coming!
Two problems: I kind of thought the music was a tad bit too intrusive, but more importantly, if the game you borrowed it from is not free, I think you can't use the music in KS levels due to possible copyright problems.
And also, there's a game-breaking problem: It's possible to get to the original hole once you get the high jump; and it's very easy to do once you get the umbrella. You should make those walls unclimbable to fix it, methinks.
9_9 Er...I have no idea how errors come up with the level, nor how to fix them.
[faq]. 4th question down in the Knytt Stories section.
So please remove any . , * & $ ( ) # @ " : ; % ^ ! or whatever it was you put in the title.
Edit: Lemme guess: there's a 1.1 in the title. Just like there was a 0.8 in your other level. Simply take out the period.