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Temporary => Knytt Stories Level Releases => Topic started by: ryantaylor on July 16, 2011, 11:57:40

Title: The lonely world(beta) download
Post by: ryantaylor on July 16, 2011, 11:57:40
  I am a Chinese,and I can't write more English,have Grammar mistakes.Please point out my mistakes.
  This is my level:
(http://img2081.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20110716/17/56725692201107161749131028493508317_005.jpg)
(http://img2081.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20110716/17/56725692201107161749131028493508317_004.jpg)
(http://img2081.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20110716/17/56725692201107161749131028493508317_003.jpg)
(http://img2081.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20110716/17/56725692201107161749131028493508317_002.jpg)
(http://img2081.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20110716/17/56725692201107161749131028493508317_001.jpg)
(http://img2081.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20110716/17/56725692201107161749131028493508317_000.jpg)
Download (http://content.screencast.com/users/ofestt/folders/Default/media/caeca6bc-38d8-492a-8d1c-f400c6dfdf06/Ryan%20Taylor%20-%20The%20lonely%20world%20beta.knytt.bin)
Title: Re: The lonely world(beta) download
Post by: RichardJ on July 18, 2011, 00:48:27
This was a nice level, thanks for making it. The grammar needs a little fixing in the intro: "One day, Juni wake up suddenly found themselves in the wild" ought to be something like "One day, Juni woke up suddenly and found herself in the wild."
At first I didn't like the hidden passages to get to things, but I got used to them quite quickly. In a few places there were animals running off ledges into the air, but it wasn't a big problem. Again, it was fun and I enjoyed it.
Title: Re: The lonely world(beta) download
Post by: Salmoneous on July 18, 2011, 21:29:54
a decent ks level, nothing special besides funny English and a totally unrelated queen Elisabeth portrait in the info screen.

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