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Temporary => Knytt Stories Level Releases => Topic started by: Razor on April 26, 2009, 11:28:35

Title: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Razor on April 26, 2009, 11:28:35

Its Really Good level you will liked it
3 Tilesets (And thats good)
the info isnt bad
there is a Story Intro / Ending
and Funny Scenes
5 Five minigames and rewards  ;)
300kb+ (I cant do more  O_o )
Its Really nice to a normal level  :P2
Try it and massage me

The info :
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/7334/infotvd.png

Ok here is That link

http://www.knyttlevels.com/levels/Razor%20-%20Hey%20Zoro%20%21.knytt.bin

Its not like another levels its Awsome :nuts: !!

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Kasran on April 26, 2009, 14:43:12

Quote from: Razor on April 26, 2009, 11:28:35

Try it and massage me

...wut?

Also, what is "metor" supposed to mean?

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Vinterrun on April 26, 2009, 17:33:06

Don`t know the level looks a bit... careless, you know. Well, the buildings are great and your work with the shift options is awesome but the world looks very unfinished.
You should add some eye candy.

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Razor on April 26, 2009, 17:46:34

Quote from: Vinterrun on April 26, 2009, 17:33:06

Don`t know the level looks a bit... careless, you know. Well, the buildings are great and your work with the shift options is awesome but the world looks very unfinished.
You should add some eye candy.

Yeah i may Make another Vison (lol)  8D

It may be bigger 2x So thanks for Comments  C)p

Dont wait it may Not to make it Only if i put it in Preview  ;)

So what you mean by : You should add some eye candy Do you mean Eye power? (There is an Eye Power)

Anyway i hope you like it  C)

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Vinterrun on April 26, 2009, 18:31:08

Eye Candy = somehting for the eyes, you know. Better graphics, (custom) objects, more details... =)

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Razor on April 26, 2009, 18:36:41

Quote from: Vinterrun on April 26, 2009, 18:31:08

Eye Candy = somehting for the eyes, you know. Better graphics, (custom) objects, more details... =)

You know not everybody can make custom objects
and i cant make anything about this level

Becuz im working on another one

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Vinterrun on April 26, 2009, 18:42:46

It wasn`t a demand, just a tipp. I`m not able to create CO`s as well, but I try to give my levels the best "outfit" I can. That`s it

Edit: Damn I should try to stay prosaic =D My english is terrible after a bottle of wine

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Morendo on April 26, 2009, 20:08:33

I'm sorry but your bad English really impairs my ability to fully understand what's going on here. Other than that it seems decent.

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: StaticRomantic on April 26, 2009, 21:22:23

This level had ups and downs.

Spoiler: (click to show/hide)

The minigames were fun and well designed for the most part. Most of the level (especially above ground) was very bland, and the buildings repeated themselves many times. (How many saloons are there? The main story had something to do with "The Saloon" being destroyed, but there's five others.) Also, interiors of buildings look nothing like interiors of buildings.

I had NO IDEA what was going on the entire time. Your english is really bad. I'm not sure if english is your second language, or if you're just really young, but I can't understand anything you say. (If it is your second language, it would be really helpful to notify us of this somewhere in your profile. And please do us all a favor and put your age too.)

Spoiler: Also, to address your level description: (click to show/hide)

You mentioned that your level is "funny" 4 times.
Most levels have "custom intros/endings". You don't have to tell us.
"Message". Not "massage".
A tileset isn't a "custom tileset" if it's not by you.
You don't have to tell us how good your level is.

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Mathexpert on April 26, 2009, 21:39:21

This level is kinda good, but it does need some work. First the english is bad. How much time did you work on it? (or it could be a second language, in that case, sorry). Second, it is kind of bland. Except for those, the rest is good. I really liked the

Spoiler: (click to show/hide)

minigames

:)

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Razor on April 27, 2009, 08:10:29

Quote from: StaticRomantic on April 26, 2009, 21:22:23

This level had ups and downs.

Spoiler: (click to show/hide)

The minigames were fun and well designed for the most part. Most of the level (especially above ground) was very bland, and the buildings repeated themselves many times. (How many saloons are there? The main story had something to do with "The Saloon" being destroyed, but there's five others.) Also, interiors of buildings look nothing like interiors of buildings.

I had NO IDEA what was going on the entire time. Your english is really bad. I'm not sure if english is your second language, or if you're just really young, but I can't understand anything you say. (If it is your second language, it would be really helpful to notify us of this somewhere in your profile. And please do us all a favor and put your age too.)

Spoiler: Also, to address your level description: (click to show/hide)

You mentioned that your level is "funny" 4 times.
Most levels have "custom intros/endings". You don't have to tell us.
"Message". Not "massage".
A tileset isn't a "custom tileset" if it's not by you.
You don't have to tell us how good your level is.

The English was bad becuz i didnt used Succesfully the signs BUT STOP SAYING THAT didnt Expected you will say that but its Truth (my keyboard isnt working).  :moody:
I didnt understand what you said about Custom Things But Dont Reply me  :sad: )
I said Already im working on another level
And the Saloons Are 5
I replayed the buildings becuz i dont have an Awsome Tileset like this
I know that the english was bad but you understand it !
Heres the minigames ~
Dodge The ball : you should press s when the ball comes yellow (Golden) - Reward = Run B
Tricky Jumps : Just climb until you get the rock - Reward = A ROCK !!?
Get me Shines : go Down and give that guy a Shiney Thing - Reward = you got NOTHING
how it goes : ??????? ( You should see it by your self )
Bowling : ??????? ( You should see it by your self > BEST MINIGAME EVER )

Thats All <_<

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Vinterrun on April 27, 2009, 10:58:13

As I said...

I should try to stay prosaic.
My english is terrible after a bottle of wine sorry =/

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Strange Darkness on April 27, 2009, 11:29:49

Well to change the conversation im gonna download and see what this level is like
*downloading*  :D

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Razor on April 28, 2009, 11:34:24

im now making the V2

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Razor on April 28, 2009, 11:34:56

any comments  :shifty:

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Razor on April 28, 2009, 11:35:39

Quote from: Strange Darkness on April 27, 2009, 11:29:49

Well to change the conversation im gonna download and see what this level is like
*downloading*  :D

well....  :huh:

Title: Re: [Challenge/Puzzle] Hey Zoro !
Post by: Strange Darkness on April 28, 2009, 11:57:20

Quote from: Razor on April 28, 2009, 11:34:56

any comment's :shifty:

yes (<- that was a comment)  XD

but seriously
minigames were quite fun that was quite enjoyable (they were awesome)
storyline... well not so good :/ (things like grammar and spelling)
tileset usage was okay somethings were overused alot (the saloons)
its okay but feels unfinished or rushed if you could fix up somethings it would be better