This was pretty good - better than your previous level, I think.Spoiler: Regarding the 'secret' (click to show/hide)
This was pretty good - better than your previous level, I think.Spoiler: Regarding the 'secret' (click to show/hide)
Dont say this
do not say that the secret is kinda EASY i have been working for a whileI'm sorry, but if you don't want your levels to be criticized you shouldn't post them here. As for the actual level, it's not very good. There is almost no scenery, and the castle isn't even done. There's almost no challenge, too.
AND YOU ARE SAYING THAT !!
Indeed. Also, I wasn't saying the secret was easy. I was merely pointing out that if you have a map with the secret clearly labelled, then it's not very secret, is it? I believe you even showed it in a preview screenshot.do not say that the secret is kinda EASY i have been working for a whileI'm sorry, but if you don't want your levels to be criticized you shouldn't post them here.
AND YOU ARE SAYING THAT !!
While I typically try to avoid criticism, I feel it's necessary in this case...
Let's say I wanted to make a s'more and I gave it the nice, rigid graham crackers for structure, the marshmallow for a good texture and flavor, and the chocolate for that extra touch...
This level isn't the best s'more ever, gotta say. Its plot is inherently whimsical, so I didn't expect much, but it'd be nice to have one beyond a simple "Go get pizza for ....this guy...." There goes the structured graham cracker. It's soggy. But that's okay, we can eat it with a napkin maybe.
Now for the marshmallow...this whole thing felt empty. No flavor, no textured feel.
But, maybe the chocolate? Some nice touches as a consolation? I'll give you that that's not horrid shift work, but I've seen better.
All in all, I wouldn't eat your s'more. But at least you've got the basics. Now go and put some effort into one, and I think you could whip up a nice one.
...Maybe a little more thought and effort, is all. But I've seen much worse. I'll give you that. :3
You make me hungry.