This is my first KS level, so I thought it'd be good to post here to get some suggestions and critique. I've been working on this for about a month and I'm at the point where I need feedback to keep going :)
Back story:
Juni's uncle Johannes is imprisoned far and away from her home by a despotic king. She must set out on her own to free him from captivity. Luckily, the people of the land are on her side and will help her in any way they can, including letting her into their homes at a moment's notice. Will Juni free Johannes, or will the king and the hostile environment keep her subdued?
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I've been using mostly the default tilesets, but in the newer screens I've branched out a little to include art of my own. I'm a little worried it might be sort of plain, so I'll work on that. It's at about 160-170 screens right now.
Some screens:
(http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/Frind/2.png)
(http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/Frind/3.png)
(http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/Frind/4.png)
(http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/Frind/Untitled-1.png)
(http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss346/Frind/map.png)
Comments? Critique? Hopes, dreams, fears?
First of all, welcome on the forum :D
I like those screens, I can see each of them were designed with much care. I can't say that the story is original, but it still works ok.
For the tilesets,
Edit: here (http://www.gaeel-music.com/public/public.html) is a link to all the public tilesets.
[mod]Ignoring, deliberately breaking the rules is not funny, ":shifty:" . <_<[/mod]
First of all, welcome on the forum :D
I like those screens, I can see each of them were designed with much care. I can't say that the story is original, but it still works ok.
For the tilesets,
Edit: here (http://www.gaeel-music.com/public/public.html) is a link to all the public tilesets.
[mod]Ignoring, deliberately breaking the rules is not funny, ":shifty:" . <_<[/mod]
Thanks - I'll definitely work some of those in! (And I'll be the first to admit, story telling isn't my strength :P2)
I've been busy, but here're some more screenies for the time being. I hope I finish this in a week or two, getting close...
(http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n184/revonael/1.png)
(http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n184/revonael/2-2.png)
(http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n184/revonael/3-1.png)
(http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n184/revonael/4-1.png)