Hi there!
These are the first 11 screens from my upcoming level, A long walk.
Better known by its old name, Wild World, this level was lost long ago (explained in the preview topic (http://nifflas.lpchip.nl/index.php?topic=3682.0))
Since I've commenced rebuilding it, I thought it might be nice to release at least a short preview of the story. This preview reveals basic plot and demonstrates one of the lovely tilesets Egomassive has made for the level. There's a lot more to the story than what is revealed, so hopefully this isn't to much of a spoiler :)
2shared (http://www.2shared.com/file/w-vWGeOh/a_Long_Walk01knytt.html)
mirror (direct link) (http://knyttlevels.com/levels/a%20Long%20Walk.01.knytt.bin)
Oh and also, I don't really know how to incorporate this but icicle (http://icickle.deviantart.com/) kindly made me this depiction of Juni in the Savanna area. I'll probably just post it along with the official release.
(http://i.imgur.com/4pSMG.png)
Please send forth your comments,
Dj
This is a really nice intro to your level; it looks fantastic and I'm really looking forward to it :)
Just a few things in the text that're a little odd;
In the second screen;
"[...]sought out to find some medicine[...]" should be "[...]set out to find some medicine[...]" or "[...]sought some medicine[...]".
In the sixth;
"[...]chores of gathering crop and milking cow[...]" should be "[...]chores of gathering the crops and milking the cows[...]"
In the seventh;
"[...]he sunk into a painless slumber[...]" would usually be "[...]he sank into a painless slumber[...]"